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April 22nd, 2016, 12:50 pm

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April 22nd, 2016, 12:56 pm

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I am getting seriously annoyed by Ivo's attitude.
He started as naturally suspicious and careful, but now he is simply provoking and violent. He's losing all sympathy from me right now as he is simply poking in what he hears until he has something else that he can punch Dragosh for.

Unless he is under some magic or drugs or possession or whatnot, he is - in my eyes - currently turning into a very childish and arrogant abuser.

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April 22nd, 2016, 2:33 pm

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@MoonByte: I get what you're saying. But I think he's emotions are still reeling from the frequent monster attacks at home, his near death experience and that the best friend he thought he had lost was/is alive and didn't think to let him know and that Dragosh didn't think of warning the villagers. On top of that he's confession of love for Ivo. Plus honestly isn't Ivo in his late teens so really still kinda a child. And there is the kinda rape thing. I think Ivo is handling this pretty good.

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April 22nd, 2016, 3:42 pm

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@Hoagie: Says he handling this good on the page when Ivo punches the shit outta Dragosh page lol

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April 22nd, 2016, 3:59 pm

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@sweetea: I would have punched him at least three pages ago. Lol

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April 22nd, 2016, 5:32 pm

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@Hoagie: I totally agree with you, people don't seem to get how bad Dragosh fucked up here srsly. You can't just go to the person who is the victim here (Ivo) and tell him to be more considerate with the person, who left him in the past, didn't help their village, didn't even consider telling them what could be the cause of the monsters, and on top of that raped Ivo (two fucking times first when they met again and the second time when Ivo bit his neck and seemed to be drugged and not quite himself thus no real consent there either) then even had the audicity to tell him how much in love he is with him
That's some fucked up shit Dragosh did and honestly he desevers more than just a punch in the face
Ivo is still being pretty calm and rational when considering the situation, he even started to talk to Dragosh after everything that happened and tried to find out what was going on

To put it simply Dragosh fucked up big time and if people can't see this then we are reading two entire different stories here

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May 4th, 2017, 4:31 am

Ladyofthenight

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@Hoagie: I love you're profile pic.

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May 4th, 2017, 5:29 am

Hoagie

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@Ladyofthenight: Thanks, I just love Yoi.

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May 22nd, 2017, 5:04 am

Ladyofthenight

(^v^)

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@Hoagie: me too

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April 22nd, 2016, 1:29 pm

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FATALITY!

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April 22nd, 2016, 1:46 pm

WarriorNun

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FLAWLESS VICTORY.

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April 22nd, 2016, 1:52 pm

yasha.queen

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Wow!! Ivo's got mad skills!!

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April 22nd, 2016, 2:10 pm

CuteMissyCat

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i was waiting for this lol!
that felt good xD

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April 22nd, 2016, 2:20 pm

Hoagie

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Wow, now that is some rough foreplay. Ivo is a totally dom bottom. (One can dream)

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April 22nd, 2016, 3:22 pm

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I zoomed into Dragosh's face in the very last panel, and to me he just looks so sad and hurt, really vulnerable... It's like Ivo's just finding new reasons to hurt him. I honestly find it hard to believe they were BEST friends before.

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April 22nd, 2016, 3:38 pm

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@TomoDatDorkHiro: You make a good point- Despite everything that has happened, these 2 were best friends first. Hopefully things will start calming down soonish cuz this redemption ark is not going to be easy for dragosh regardless.^^;;

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April 22nd, 2016, 5:35 pm

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That punch was A+
Ivo you have one hell of a punch there you go man!!

(To the author I still love this story to bits so gratefull to you for keeping Ivo angry as it should be you are doing a fine job here, I am rooting for this story!!!)

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April 22nd, 2016, 6:59 pm

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Am I the only one who is on Dragosh's side? He fucked up but I don't think he deserved to get punched.

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April 23rd, 2016, 11:32 am

raziesgirl (Guest)

This story is awesome

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Get some Dragosh you deserve it it's sad that so many fangirls and boy's are so used to Japanese yoai where the Seme/top can do terrible things to his uke/bottom and get away with it . I mean shit that they should be doing time for but are forgiven because they say they love the Uke/bottom to much in yoai is glossed over and in fact it becomes infuriating to read sometimes . Especially forced sex which is a crime some forget that Although it's just a story in my book it's a damn good one it still doesn't make it right . So I'm glad that your not going in that vain of having Ivo forgive Dragosh just because he said that he loved him it would riun your awesome comic for me .

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April 23rd, 2016, 11:48 am

Eris (Guest)

Question...

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...People keep talking about how young Ivo is, and how that justifies his emotions aND actions thus far (not saying it doesn't, so hear me out).

Isn't Dragosh younger than Ivo? Shouldn't that explain (if not completely excuse) his own actions as well? As children, especially non-combative children, the world is very clear-cut and simple in terms of what we can and cannot do. If we do something wrong, we have to be punished or (more likely) stay away from our guardians so they can't punish us, even in the face of something more important. It happens all the time with normal relationships - Dragon felt so alone and outcast that he ran away and became a demon. To a child's mind, that's something punishable, and he would have never considered going back while he was that monster.

Or, really, ever. Because if the village sucked that much before, it probably hasn't changed.

I just want to know, I guess, why we're blaming Dragosh for absolutely everything, even things that are not his fault... and siding with Ivo when he is committing battery on someone for something that is a product of how they grew up and an inaction RATHER than a direct action meant to cause harm.

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April 23rd, 2016, 2:29 pm

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@Eris:
@Raziesgirl:
I completely agree with Eris here. And it's true that in yaoi the seme is often just "forgiven", but I don't believe that's the case here. Ivo could have said no or done something; he's completely capable to use violence, so what would've stopped him from punching Dragosh if he didn't want to have sex with Dragosh at all?

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April 23rd, 2016, 3:38 pm

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@TomoDatDorkHiro:
@Eris:
@Raziesgirl:
My point EXACTLY.
If Ivo is so pissed for the rape, then GEEZ, don't talk with him?! Dragosh at first followed him around and forced himself on him, but it seems like Dragosh has noticed that he's not liked and backed off.
If Ivo would tell him to leave him the fuck alone and not talk, he would probably do it (either waiting for Ivo to calm down or until Ivo leaves as punishment).
But no, what ivo is doing here right now is pretty much just reverse abuse: You hurt me, so i am gonna hurt you! Yes, the rape was not pretty, but how is mentally and physically attacking Dragosh making Ivo any better?
I mean, for how long does Ivo plan to pull that through? Dragosh is sorry for what he's done and he tries to be helpful to make up for it and all Ivo does is kick him in the balls, laugh about it, then kick harder.
Sorry, but that doesn't make me feel sympathy for the victim for that long.

If I had to compare it, it would be like treating a guy that raped a woman by dragging her off the street, threatening her with a knife and then beating her up to make sure she keeps quiet with two teens having drunk sex and then regretting it.
Because, yeah, it can be classified as rape what had happened, BUT Dragosh at no point really FORCED Ivo in the sense of how rape often happens. He took advantage, yes, but he at no point had hurt or threatened Ivo. Ivo has the right to be mad and hate what happened. But him being this violent is too much, in my opinion.

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April 25th, 2016, 5:47 pm

raziesgirl (Guest)

Wow are you for real

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@MoonByte are you serious with your post first they where best friends yeah Ivo use to tease Dragosh but what friends don't yes both of them are young. So there emotions are all over the place second it's clear that Although Ivo cared deeply for Dragosh hell he kept looking for him which meant that he truly missed him . Third Ivo has no Intention's of staying there with Dragosh while his Peep's are in danger is he suppose to ? Fourth when they first had sex Ivo just barely survived not only was he still messed up but he was also drugged or did you not remember that part .With the second time that they had sex Ivo had no intentions of having sex with Dragosh again it was clear to anyone who was reading this comic that Ivo was not himself . It has not been explained what exactly happened yet and yes I can say that Dragosh was wrong because he didn't have Ivo's consent either time's . Even though Dragosh didn't know why Ivo seemed to want to have sex with him the second time he should have known that something was up that Ivo was acting strange but because Dragosh wanted it he assumed that Ivo did which he didn't but couldn't control himself . Don't think that I don't get that Dragosh has been in love with Ivo for a long time but just because you love someone doesn't mean that they will love you back it's obvious that Ivo had no idea how Dragosh felt about him . If Dragosh had went about it differently I'm sure that Ivo would have reacted in a different manner you guys are so worried about Dragosh that you don't even get that Ivo has been through a lot plus he doesn't know if his home and his family is all right . As a pose to Dragosh who doesn't give a good God damn about the village he only cares about Ivo while Ivo cares about everyone including Dragosh so yeah he thinks that by Dragosh messing with those ruin's that he bought disaster on the village and rightly so .

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May 4th, 2016, 11:42 am

Raiyn

Ivo...

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Is still being an ass. I would have just left him by now...

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